King,

Really enjoyed this one. I kinda of like the Stripper vs former stripper setup here. The stuff in the pool was great, too. It was a unique setting for sure. This shorter story left me wanting more, lol. Beatrice and Torrie seem to have unfinished business even at the end of the story. It really helped that these two women felt so similar but very different. There was a unique tension in the air that I really enjoyed.

The pool being there was really crazy. I didn't think they'd make it into the poop once let alone a second time. Beatrice was a very professional woman but Torrie reallyed stripped her down until they were equals. Really made me think. Despite her desire to improve things Beatrice was just as much of a stripper as Torrie. I winder what would happen in a second encounter?

Very fun short story! You're having writers block? I think everything you've written has been amazing. There so much variety in your stuff too. It's always really fun to read your stories. I'll always look forward to whatever you're working on next!